Photo by Charlie Harutaka at Unsplash
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Light flickers off the breakers, a blinding, shattered mirror sea.
He’s mesmerised by her: skin – coppered as much by reflected rays as by the sun itself: how she slips from bow to stern, pulling ropes he has no name for, ducking the boom as it swings overhead and the one thing he’s sure of – surer than his own next breath – is that he’ll never, ever leave her.
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Such a shame when they get like that, poor old things – staring at a toy boat all day’s no way to spend your last years. ‘Time for tea, Mr Stamp. Mr Stamp?’
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Written in response to Sonya at Only 100 Words’ Three Line Tales. See the well picked pic prompt, write a story in three-ish sentences, share and comment. See full rules here.
Poignant. I like this one 🙂
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Ah, thank you Jane. Always good to remember we were all young once. 🙂
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Ah to be lost in reverie….then reality bites 🙂 Really like what you did in this one!
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Thank you! Yes, if you’re realities not that special, it’s tempting to vanish into a brighter one – even if it is just built of memories. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Yes, there’s something melancholy about the pic, isn’t there? Love your take – great lines, Lynn 🙂
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Thank you. Yes, maybe it’s the blue tones of the pic, the condensation on the window? Whichever, it certainly is deeply melancholic
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Beautifully written, and caught me at the end – in the best kind of way.
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Thank you very much. I enjoyed writing this one. So many pieces of flash I fancy turning into something longer … Thanks for reading 🙂
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Fabulous, Lynn! I love how well you describe things
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Thank you Lori and thank you reading again 🙂
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My pleasure, Lynn 🙂
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🙂
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As always, I am mesmerized by your tale. Wonderfully told. Congratulations!
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Thank you so much – you’re very kind 🙂
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Poignant and melancholic.
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Thank you very much and thanks for reading 🙂
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You are welcome.
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A poignant tale.
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Thank you very much – thanks for reading 🙂
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