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The sun was just rising as I walked across the runway towards her. She was a beauty, sleek nose, stubby wings, her colours spotless – factory fresh. Conditions were perfect, the air so still, it cradled my breath for an age before it slowly drifted away.
The swallows were back, dashing lowย over tin huts and props and cockpits, putting my own flying abilities to shame as they snatched an early breakfast.
The copper head of Sammy Newton appeared round the nose of the Spitfire. Such a nice lad – thank goodness he was on my ground crew for final checks. He looked up, his map of freckles shifting as he smiled.
‘Ready, then?’ he said.
I nodded, hardly able to speak, my stomach already doing barrel rolls.
‘Now, remember, Mary,’ he said, ‘no altimeter, no air speed indicator – only the gyro and the compass to stop you from dashing across the Channel and paying Hitler a visit.’ He wiped his hands on aย rag. ‘You ready?’
It was as if the swallows had broken into my chest, beating their stiff wings against my ribs, plucking my heart outย to soar with them.
‘I’ve waited years …’ I said.
He nodded. ‘Let’s take her up, then.’
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Written for Roger Shipp’s Flash Fiction for the Purposeful Practitioner. See the prompt, include the sentiment (This week –ย โI had waited years for this dayโฆโ) and scribble a tale.
This story was inspired byย thisย pic if of a training plane used by the Allies towards the end of World War II and beyond. I remembered what I’d learned about WAAFs,ย especially the brave ladies of the the Royal Air Force’s Air Transpor Auxilliary who had movedย planes (often very new and without their full compliment of controls) across the country during the War. They faced a lot of prejudice and whatever their skills, they had to wait longer than their male counterparts before they were allowed toย fly bombers like the Lancaster or fighters like the Spitfireย –ย which many fell in love with.
Sixteen of the female pilots died during the course of their duties.
Read more about them here.
great story, loved it ๐
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Thank you! Loved being able to share the link about those indomitable ladies – brave and fiesty and until recently, a tiny bit forgotten ๐
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Fascinating. I always learn something from you Lynn.
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Agreed!
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Thanks Walt ๐
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Thanks love. An interesting bit of history, those fiesty gals. Imagine how exciting and scary for women used to just being farmed off in marriages when they reached a certain age. Feminism in action, really ๐
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Absolutely, it was the start of it all really wasn’t it? Once they were of no use anymore they were expected to go back to being housewives and realised they could be more. Which coming from a housewife sounds odd! But you get my drift…
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Absolutely! I understand entirely why the government hoofed the women out of their jobs after the war – you can’t have fighting men coming home to unemployment. But imagine how frustrating it must have been, how undervalued the women must have felt. No wonder their daughters kicked up such a fuss in the 60s and 70s! X
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Indeed! Get back to the kitchen woman!
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Haha! Well, things have changed now – we’ve forced ourselves into all levels of work and industry. And we’re still trying to run homes and have kids too. There’s progress for you!
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I am all for women’s emancipation and participation in all aspects of life. Reading this makes me proud with a tinge of sadness – I cant imagine how difficult life was for women then. Thank you for the story and the link, Lynn.
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My pleasure, Annie. Such an amazing, frightening but also revolutionary time for women, the war. They had a chance – by default – to do so many things they would have been excluded from before the men left to fight. These ladies must have been tough – amazing, whatever way you look at it ๐ Thank you for reading
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Beautifully written! I like the story too – and it’s always great to learn something new at the same time!
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Thanks Felicia. And what great women to learn about – there ust be so many stories to write about them. Thanks for reading
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Reblogged this on Kate McClelland.
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Your knowledge comes through nicely in this piece–not overbearing but just enough to really add authenticity. I love the part about the swallows!
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Ah, bless those swallows! You often see them swooping anywhere with an expanse of open ground and a bit of grass. Thank you for the kind comments – it’s a subject I find fascinating, so I’m glad that came across. Thanks for reading ๐
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A beautiful and well-written story. Loved it ๐
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Thanks Sammi – you’re very kind. And thanks for reading ๐
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Have I ever told you how much I love your writing style – it’s so evocative.
I expect I have – several times ๐
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Thank you Jane – you’re very kind. Hard to identify your own style, don’t you think? I think I’ve gradually developed now, but I’m not sure what makes it mine, if you get my drift. I liked writing about these ladies – a brave and bolshy bunch ๐
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You definitely have a unique style – you have a brilliant way of catching atmosphere in a few words, and you make the most hideous characters lovable. Why in hell’s name is your novel not published and on the bestsellers list? Your flash fiction is great, your articles are entertaining and original. Are the publishers idiots, or have you got some important detail wrong?
Has anyone critiqued your book – apart from husband, sister, close friend etc, because they would hear your voice as you were reading, andmit would affect their judgement.
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Ah, Jane. I keep saying you should be my publicist and I’m absolutely right! Yes, a few professionals have looked at parts of the book – positive snippets, but nothing definite yet. Just starting my search for an agent – quite intimidating process. Maybe one day. Meanwhile, lovely comments like yours keep me plugging away – thank you so much. Again ๐
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I mean everything I say, and I’m an avid reader with high standards.
Did you ever get around to submitting anything to MASH, by the way?
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Yes, I did a while back. First time I missed out – not their cup of tea, I think. Second time I was accepted after a long wait and some technical hiccup. Didn’t get many votes, but still great to get some work on there. And I wouldn’t have gone on there at all if it hadn’t been for your own success with them – thank you Jane.
http://www.mashstories.com/previouslypublished/cigarettes-oily-tea/
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I’m sorry – I missed it at the time. I’ve just read it, and it’s good, but it doeasn’t carry your hallmark, somehow.
When I submitted my story, one of the other submissions was about a divorced woman with a child. It got a lot of votes although I considered it less than mediocre. I think the votes depend largely on the subject matter – and that vitriolic piece may have appealed to a lot of angry women, but maybe I’m being unfair. It put me off the competition, although I like the site.
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I think you’re right, that certain themes gain more votes than others and that doesn’t always reflect the quality of the piece. I have read the odd outstanding story on there, but alot are a bit ‘meh’. As for me, I just don’t think I really fit what they value from an author, and you’re right, after my first rejection (a comic story about old people really misbehaving) I tried to fit into their themes. I liked my published story well enough, but no, probably not quite ‘me’. I’m glad I got published on there, but I won’t be trying again – probably. ๐
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There are plenty of markets out there…
I’d like to read your story about naughty pensioners – it sounds like fun ๐
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Too many markets to make sense of sometimes! I liked my pensioners – it involved blackmail and skin coloured knitting as I recall ๐
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That sounds wonderfully bonkers. Did they make it to your blog, or did you abandon them in the corridors of Mash?
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No, they’re still lounging on my hard drive. Keep meaning to resubmit all of the rejected stories I’ve written over the years, but finding the right place for tales can be time consuming and there are so many new stories to write ๐
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And, of course, you would probably want to edit them once you re-read them.
So many stories and so little time…
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Very true about the editing. No story ever feels finished as such – there’s always room for improvement. You just have to draw a line at some point and let them go or you’d revise forever ๐
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The advantage of constantly revising is that your work never gets rejected because it’s never readt to be submitted ๐
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Haha! Not wrong there. My problem is, the stories I need to revise have all been rejected at least once already. Though saying that, I did have one story that was accepted – and won a prize – after being rejected 3 times. Just shows, perseverance …
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It’s morethan anything a question of knowing what they’re looking for. The publishing world is crazy – for example, children’s fiction the most difficult genre to get published, and yet the bookshop shelves are stacked with dross – in addition to all the great stuff like Where’s Bernard and Rosie’s Walk, and so on..
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There is rubbish out there – in every genre. Some of it sells really well, though. But there is also amazing stuff too. I know picture books are very tricky to het into – seems to be a lot of YA writers, though, which is good news as far as I’m concerned (even though I’m not 100 % YA).
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What do you mean, Not 100% young, or not 100% adult ? ๐
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Well, I’m no where near 100% young! My writing is mainly adult, I think – but my most complete book is YA. I do have a couple of other YA ideas bubbling under, but as far as the future is concerned – am I a YA or adult writer? Not sure
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How about both. You can be cross gender – I mean genre – if you choose ๐
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Haha! Cross gender-cross genre: could be a new thing altogether. Ideally I’d love to write both. Some authors manage it. Better focus on getting any kind of publishing deal first … ๐
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That seems a good plan, then when you achieve success you can diversify ๐
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very courageous of them, nice story
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Thank you ๐
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