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‘Nice one, Tom.’ Annie’s feet were perished, like she had frozen fish fingers in her boots instead of toes. ‘Good … cross.’
Was she saying the right thing? Tom looked the other way every time he ran past her, so she guessed she was making a fool of herself. Truth was, she knew more about quantum physics than she knew about football and what she knew about both she could etch on a grain of rice.
But since his dad left, Tom needed someone to shout for him. Even if that someone was clueless.
‘Hi. You’re Tom’s mum, Annie, right?’ He was tall, attractive in a crinkly-eyed way.
‘Err.’
Crinkly Eyes smiled. ‘I’m Carl. Tom’s new coach.’
‘Oh, hi.’
‘You’re very … enthusiastic.’
Suddenly all of her felt warm, even the fish finger toes.
‘Maybe I could tell you what’s going on in the game?’ Another crinkly smile.
Annie wondered if he knew much about quantum physics.
Written for Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. See the pic and write a story of up to 175 words. See here to read more stories and join the fun.
Here’s hoping Annie gets a chance to tell him all about quantum physics… over dinner, perhaps. 🙂 Nice hopeful story Lynn, especially for those of us still looking for Mr. Crinkly Eyes. 😉
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You need to hang around football matches more, Joy 🙂 I love crinkly eyes – not sure what it is about them. Someone who clearly smiles a lot is always attractive, I guess. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Although hanging around football matches, seems like I’d meet men who wanted to spend time at football matches, and I’m not that big on sports. Maybe I should hang around… bookstores?
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Well, there are plenty of book shops with cafes you could hang out in. The danger might be finding a book that’s too good and being too absorbed to notice someone trying to flirt. Good idea though. People must do that, right?
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Back when there were bookstores, yes I suppose they did. But bookstores are a dying breed around here.
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We still have a couple of big shops in Bristol and both have cafes to draw people in. I find it hard to believe our cultures can’t support bookshops – depressing too.
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The lure of shopping for books online is powerful — so easy to find exactly what you want from the comfort of your own home.
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Sad. But very true. Nothing like browsing in a shop though 🙂 Mmmmm. Books
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Good story, I liked that Annie was there for her son even though she didn’t know what was going on! And she might have got a happy ending out of it too. Best, Iain
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Let’s hope for a happy ending. If nothing else she might learn the off-side rule 🙂 Thanks very much for reading, Iain
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Ahh, cute story! I think it’s great that her son’s coach was willing to teach her about the game! And, I like that she was there for her son. Love it!
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Thanks Joy. The things we do for our kids. Though I think she’ll enjoy the fotball more from now on 🙂
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Cute story. But dating the coach might be a bad idea because the other mothers will think she is trying to get favor for her son.
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Very true. They’ll have to be discreet – no holding hands on the sidelines. Those parents can be very competitive 🙂 Thanks so much for reading
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Delightful cute tale. I bet she would like some french fries with those fish fingers 🙂
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Haha! Nice one, Graham. Thanks very much for reading 🙂
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I just love this very much!
I want a longer version to sit down and enjoy.
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Thank you so much! That exciting first moment of chemistry between people – so lovely. Thank you for reading 🙂
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The things moms will do for their kids! I’m glad she’s getting an extra benefit to the footie!
I imagine he has lovely blue eyes, creased from smiling and being in the sun.
Lovely wee story.
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Thank you, love. I think your right about the eyes- crinkly from smiling is a very attractive thing. Crinkly from too many late, drunk-fuelled nights … Not so much 🙂
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Haha! Cute story! 🙂
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Thank you very much 🙂
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Seems like football will be on the agenda now.🙂
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I think it will 🙂 Thanks for reading
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Ah, a sweet story.
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Thank you Sally. And thanks for reading 🙂
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I soy romance brewing 😊
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Fingers crossed, Jacqueline 🙂 Thanks so much for reading
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