‘Graceful as an elephant,’ Dad muttered as I tripped for the third time.
I sat on the pavement, examining the fresh graze on my knee, blood like red pearls on scuffed skin. I’d grazed the toes of my new shoes too, roughened leather showing pale against the chestnut brown polish. I could have cried, but refused to let myself.
Dad had gone up ahead, past the grocer’s cart with its hillock of crinkling Granny Smith’s, past the chemist with its giant bottles of jewellΒ colouredΒ liquids, copperplate brassΒ plaquesΒ declaring Elix. Cardammomi co, Elix. Carnis et Ferri.
He turned back to see where I was, spun smoothlyΒ on his heel, his jacket flaring, his arms raised slightly, as if ready to dance. He kept on walking,Β one step, two, down the curb ontoΒ Β Old Farm Road. He was frowning, eyes searching the air above my head.
A horn sounded. A thud. The pages of a newspaper flapping to the ground like wearyΒ pigeons.
Dad taught me a lesson I shall never forget – it’s better to be awareΒ than graceful.
Written for The Daily Post’s Daily Prompt – GRACEFUL. Visit here to join in and to read the other posts.
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Great post!
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Thanks Laura. You’re very kind. And thanks for reading π
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π Thank you
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Wait…what just happened?
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Ha! A little girl just learned a very valuable life lesson – and might just have lost her Dad at the same time. Thanks for reading π
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I was afraid of thatπ
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“The pages of a newspaper flapping to the ground like weary pigeons.” I love that! It gives such a cinematographic image – dad landing on the ground, sending up a small flurry of dust, the paper fluttering down to land around him as the dust settles. I can see it in detail, in slow motion. His jacket is brown, and slightly frayed…
I don’t think she likes her dad much. Can she get by without him?
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I think you’re right, Jane – Dad’s not the warmest of people. I imagine her being close with her mum, so I think she’ll be fine. Thank you for such lovely comments and I’m really glad you liked the pigeon image – I was pleased with that one π
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So you should have been – it was a triumph!
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Thank you so much for being so lovely! π
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You say the nicest things π
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wow surprise ending. You are right. It pays to be aware and to get through the ungrateful moments. If I trip I laugh and smile and get back up. If you’re good natured about it and not hurt it’s okay. Very sad about the Dad.
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Thanks Mandi. Yes, we all need to laugh at ourselves and not worry too much about how we look to others – that way lies madness! Thanks for reading π
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