photo by Annie Spratt via Unsplash
Susie’s fingers trailed over the linen table cloth, rumpling the fabric, pushing cutlery together with a bright ching – the sound of tiny bells ringing.
She straightened the cloth, placing the knife and fork in line, soldiers standing guard beside the plate. The flicker of candles in shimmering glass, the sweet scents of mint and rosemary, lavender and bay – all magical. Still her eyes returned to the flowers … and two black dahlias, strangely unsettling amid the warmth and light. She turned at the sound of footsteps.
‘Shall we begin?’ said John, closing the door behind him.
Written for Sonya at Only 100 Words’ Three Line Tales. See the pic and write a tale – see here to join in and to read the other stories.
Um, I hope there’s a fire exit…
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Haha! 🙂
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Great tale! I especially like the line, “knives standing like soldiers” — brilliantly foreshadowing what is yet to come.
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Thank you so much – glad you picked up on the hint of threat there. Bad things ahead. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Words oozing with intention 😉
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Thank you 🙂
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You are very welcome 😊
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Wonderfully descriptive, what a punch of anticipation and mystery deliver in that last line! Love it.
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Thanks so much Lee! Fun to build a bit of tnesion, isn’t it? Love this about writing, imagining yourself there and using ‘tricks’ to suggest what’s to come. Thanks very much for reading
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Quite a hooking little piece, left me very curious!
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Ooh, great! Very glad about that and glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading
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Sounds like there is a strange backstory to this.
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And possibly a disturbing story to come too 🙂 Thanks Patricia
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Hope no one ends up as dinner.
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So do I! Thanks for reading 🙂
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