PHOTO PROMPT © Al Forbes
Lou peered through the net curtains, watching the street through a mesh of swirls and flowers.
The automobile was still across the road, an alien thing of brass and leather, rubber, smoke and noise.
‘It doesn’t run on coal?’ she said over her shoulder.
George was reading the Sporting Life, the pages spread across the dining table as he took notes on the day’s runners and riders. ‘No, love. Something called petroleum.’
‘Petroleum?’ The word sounded like a pomade you bought from the barber’s – something that would leave greasy marks on the furniture. ‘Filthy thing. They’ll never catch on.’
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers. See the pic and write a tale. Visit here to join in and to read the other, wonderful stories.
The Sporting Life was a British newspaper which was largely known for its coverage of horse racing – those ‘runners and riders’ George is so keen on.
Too bad they did. Love that word play with the pomade.
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Thank you so much Kecia. Glad you liked it 🙂
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I smelt the era, lovely piece of writing.
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Thank you Michael. Glad the era came through clearly – always an interesting thing to pull off in few words 🙂
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Evocative piece with a classic punchline. Hard to imagine what people thought seeing these machines for the first time, and the impact they have had – good and bad.
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Very true – I’m sure no one could have predicted how reliant we would become on them and so quickly. Thank you Iain 🙂
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Hahaha! Indeed. So much the thinking of some people today. And to think that I was born around the time of when the integrate circuit was invented! Who knew?
Neat story, Lynn. It’s full of people. That’s NICE! 🙂
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Thanks Kent 🙂
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Excellent descriptions!
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Thank you Dale 🙂
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I love her thoughts on petroleum – made me smile. Great story, Lynn 🙂
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Ah, thanks Sammi. I liked that bit but wasn’t sure if it would work for other people – glad it worked for you 🙂
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Good descriptions – very evocative.
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Thanks Sandra 🙂
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A bet that was the thought most people had when cars came one the scene. Oh, just look at us now. Great take.
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Thank you Alicia 🙂
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I bet these newfangled calculating engines won’t catch on either
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Just a fad, Neil, I’m sure 🙂
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Funny take on the photo! I can certainly see how this would have seemed a ridiculous fad at the time. I had the same comment on Rochelle’s page, that it’s amazing to think of how bizarre these cars must have seemed at first. Or for that matter, can you imagine seeing a train for the first time, if your whole world has been horse carts?
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Yes, very true – trains especially, I think would have seemed extraordinary. All that steam and smoke and noise for many who lived in the countryside and the loudest thing thet encountered would be church bells! No wonder they were often unpopular and people believed you’d faint if you went over 40 miles per hour 🙂
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I’d heard that too — 40 miles per hour must have seemed incredibly fast. And the trains are just huge, too. And of course, in those days, still quite dangerous (not that they’ve worked all the bugs out even now). Yes, it would not be something for the faint of heart to try!
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🙂
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Haha! If only she knew lol. Great piece of history in your writing today 🙂
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Yes, if she only knew! Thank you Jade 🙂
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Good post. this reminds me of the predictions made when computers first came out: home computers would never catch on. After all, they’d take one whole room to house them.
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Haha! Very true, Christine. Who could have imagined technology would change so quickly? Thank you for reading 🙂
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For a second, I couldn’t tell if this were a scene from the past or the future. In the far future, gas driven cars will be seen as archaic and even dangerous. All that pollution.
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In the not so distant future, I hope – we can’t ustain the pollution levels we have at the moment. I think London hit their annual pollution level within the first few days of January. Terrifying stuff. Thanks for reading
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Dear Lynn,
I love this slice of history. Nicely described with believable dialogue. However, toward the end I think you mean ‘word’ and not ‘world.’ 😉
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much for pointing out the typo – found and changed. And thanks for the kind words, Rochelle 🙂
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Nicely done. Thanks for the smile.
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Thank you 🙂
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Clever and funny, Lynn, and maybe a bit sad,
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Yes, I think a bit sad. Living in a city that is terrifyingly congested and polluted, I can’t help wishing Lou had been right 🙂
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A lovely piece of interaction, great dialogue and unfortunately she was wrong. (I feel hypocritical saying this as obviously, I have a car and it gives me the freedom to do so many things I couldn’t without one.)
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Thank you Michael. I don’t condemn you for rueing the dominance of the car – it affects all our lives and often not in a good way. If only those early inventors had developed cleaner ways to run the darn things. And you’re absolutely right about convenience – we’re a non-driving family and quite honestly we’ve missed out on a lot over the years as a consequence, public transport just not being up to certain things. No wonder my 12 year old son is a petrol head … 🙂
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Wonderful POV, you really made me think.
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Thanks so much, Dawn 🙂
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