PHOTO PROMPT © Roger Bultot
The pavement below the apartment window was black with ice, the sill domed with half an inch of snow from the last fall. Just the sight of it made Rima draw back from the glass.
Her fingers trailed to the orchid plant, a gift from Stacey, the kind landlady with hair the colour of orange juice.
The plant’s waxy petals and stiff green leaves seemed to speak to her. She and it were both foreign, rootless, transplanted from far away to the chill, hard bustle of the city.
But the orchid was still beautiful – still flowering. Perhaps she could too.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers. See the pic and write a tale and visit here to read the other stories and to leave one of your own,
Aaww this is beautifully described, I love the description. I’m ready to fly.
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Thank so much. Hopefully she is too 🙂
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‘Hair the colour of orange juice’. How I can visualise that! Good one Lynn, the descriptions of the orchid were spot on.
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Ah, thank you, Sandra! Glad you liked the descriptions 🙂
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Beautiful last line, Lynn. 🙂
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Thank you, Sammi 🙂
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Powerful metaphor, Lynn, the rootless flower
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Thank you Neil 🙂
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I hope so.
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🙂
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Love it, the sense of being stranded in a foreign place… (I can just imagine how lost i would be in a tropic city…)
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It’s very disorientating, being in a place that’s os different from your home. I only have a small experience with it – Cairo airport at midnight, the bustle, the language, the dust, the smells – it throws you. I guess if you’re a seasoned traveller it’s easier, but it’s a shock alright. Thanks Bjorn
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This had a wistful feel. I liked the hopefulness at the end.
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Aw, than you 🙂
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This leaves the reader with such hope! Well done.
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Thanks Alicia 🙂
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I really enjoyed this, The descriptions were great and I like the sense of hope
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Thanks very much Dale 🙂
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Nice way to draw the contrast between the summery-seeming bloom and the snow on the sill. And I think most of us can relate to feeling out of our element and not quite rooted yet. At least there’s hope!
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Always that, Joy 🙂 Thanks
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Very fitting story for these nasty times. I liked the ‘orange juice’ too.
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Thanks Jane. I was thinking of the current refugee crises, of displaced people and how unsettling it must be to be somewhere so alien to what you know. Thank you 🙂
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And to discover that nobody wants to let you in.
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Yes, very true
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Dear Lynn,
I know it’s been said, but you nailed the landlady with the “hair the colour of orange juice.” Beautifully constructed and I love that it ended on a hopeful note. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you so much Rochelle – it means a great deal 🙂
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You planted a great story, it blossomed so well, I hope Rima blossom’s also.
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Thanks so much Michael 🙂 I’m sure she will
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I love the sense of hope Lynn.
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Thank you! Yes, I managed hope this week – most unlike me 🙂 Thanks Louise
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She certainly will. 🙂 Love it.
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Thank you1 🙂
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I love it that she found inspiration and hope reflected in the flower. Nicely done, Lynn.
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Good story of hope.
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Thank you so much. Yes, a new future for her, let’s hope 🙂
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A message of hope. Lovely.
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Thank you so much. 🙂
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Exquisitely expressed, love it.
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Ah, thank you C! Glad you liked it 🙂
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Nicely done, Lynn. Some great expression going on here.
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Thank you Kent. I little glimmer of hope – quite a novelty for me 🙂
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I love orchids and their beauty and you’ve captured that and the hope it holds in the midst of all the gloom around, brilliantly. I really enjoyed reading this
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Thank you so much, Michael, you’re very kind and I’m so glad it worked for you. I just imagined the human eqivalent of that hothouse flower surviving the cold. Thanks so much 🙂
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I do love a story of hope. Thanks Lynn.
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Thanks Dawn. Yes, unusual for me to write something so positive, but a nice experience all the same 🙂
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Ahh…hope!
Thank you for bringing some light into this weeks dark prose.
– Lisa
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Haha! Yes, most unlike me. 🙂 Thanks so much for reading
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