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Danny had to wait until midnight for the lights to go out, but he was still dressed, ready to scurry across the road, to silently push the scarlet envelope through the letterbox.
The snow was falling as he darted for home, flakes soft and light as down.
The doorbell woke him next morning.
Hannah stood on the step, Valentine’s hearts visible through the torn envelope in her hand. He looked behind her, at the twin tracks in the otherwise unblemished snow – her’s heading one way, smudging his own from last night.
‘So much for secrets,’ he said.
She grinned.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers. See the pic and write a tale. Go here to join in and to read the other stories.
He knew. C’mon he knew
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Maybe. Maybe he was too nervous to notice. Either way, he may have the outcome he wanted. Thanks Neil
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Haha. Very cute.
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Thanks 🙂
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Lovely idea that his footsteps have him away. By the sounds of her reaction it was for the best 🙂
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Yep. Maybe he should have been more open about his feelings. But she tracked him down in the end. Thanks Iain
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Dear Lynn,
Looks like the beginning of a romance. Sweet story.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Yes, perhaps the start of something. 🙂
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Really sweet.
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Thanks 🙂
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This is so cute 🙂
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Yes, bit too cute for me. I’m sure normal service will resume shortly 🙂
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😀
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Lynn, that was the sweetest! Loved it
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Thanks so much, Dale. Very unlike me to write something sweet! 🙂
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Sweet is good, once in a while! 😉
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Makes a change at least 🙂
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Snow is a terrible tattle tale.
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Haha! So it is, James. 🙂
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Aw! This reminds me a bit of when I left a love note under a door in college. That worked out well too. We’ll be married 22 years in May.
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That’s lovely! Well done for leaving that note – I wonder if my couple will still be together in 22 years. Thanks for reading 🙂
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I love a wee tale that plants a grin on my face. And this one did just that. So cute.
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Thanks Magaly – so glad you liked it 🙂
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A little heart beat of a snowy romance in the offing. Beautiful, Lynn.
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Thanks so much Neel 🙂
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Sweet 🙂 He was lucky the snow hadn’t covered his tracks in the night. I bet she was looking out for him, though.
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Quite possibly she was – he’s clearly not very good at covering his tracks! Thanks Jane 🙂
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So sweet, and a good thing she found him out, too. I love it.
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Thanks so much Gabi. A sweet tale for me this week – makes a change 🙂
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Such a lovely idea!
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Weirdly romantic for me – ordinarily, he’d be over there pushing spells through her letterbox or they’d both die in s ome awful plague / supernatural attack / other dystopian scenario. Shockingly short on bloodshed … 🙂
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Aww this is so sweet ❤
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Thanks Louise – most unlike me 🙂
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Yea – this is great.At last a story I can smile at!
Click for my Friday Fiction
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Unusually blood and terror free for me! Thanks Keith 🙂
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That’s adorable. I loved it.
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Aw, thank you so much!I’m really glad you liked it 🙂
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After reading this I am a convert to Valentine Day
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Thank you so much Michael. I take that as a great compliment
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Love this sweet tale!
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Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it 🙂
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Very cute.
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Thanks Trent 🙂
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Oh, that is cute, Lynn! It brought back memories of snowy Februarys and Valentine’s Day cards we passed out in school. Nice and sweet!
Five out of five palpitations. 🙂
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Haha! Thanks Kent. Glad you liked it. Happy school memories, I hope? 🙂
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Yes, very.
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🙂
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Sweet love story for Valentines.
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Thank you Liz! 🙂
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I love a bit of romance! Lovely story.
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Thank you Clare. Glad you liked it 🙂
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Cute one Lynn. They both receive their Valentine from the one they want 🙂
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Thanks Amanda. Yes, a potential happy ending for a change 🙂
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What a wonderful sweet story…. the snow both hides and reveals 🙂
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Yes, you’re right. It always adds a certain mysterious something to a scene, doesn’t it? Thanks for reading 🙂
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Very sweet.
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Thanks Sascha 🙂
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I liked that grin.
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Ha! Thanks Dawn
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That was so sweet! What a lovely story.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Sweet, sweet story. Love the footsteps detail. This brought a much needed smile, Lynn… lovely!
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Thanks so much Dawn. Nice to write with a lighter tone for a change 🙂
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