The rain stopped on the seventh day, the black veil of cloud that hung snare-like over the village giving way to blue skies and feathery cirrus.
Vitor sat on the balcony staring across the river, cigarillo clamped between yellowed teeth, smoke caressing his face. Behind him, the door banged open then shut.
‘It’s time.’ Enzo’s voice was tight, higher than usual.
Vitor raised his hand, waved the cigarillo.
Sighing, Enzo snatched it from his fingers, dragged over a crate to sit beside him. ‘I want to get it over.’
‘You need to be sharp, but calm or you’ll make mistakes.’ He could feel the boy stiffen, offended by the slur.
‘I won’t -‘
Vitor shrugged. ‘We all do.’
They gazed across the spiralling water, watched a harpy eagle soar and dip over the walking palms.
Finally, Vitor stirred. ‘Go fetch him. And make sure he’s blindfolded.’
Written for What pegman saw, the writing prompt that uses Google Street View. See here to join in and to read the other stories.
Such an ominous end–I feel afraid! Wonderfully written.
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Thanks so much Karen. Yes, something bad is coming that’s for sure. Great prompt again 🙂
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Dear Lynn,
Methinks something evil’s about to happen. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle – I think you’re right! Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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Planning a kidnapping for some blackmail money, although they don’t seem like a professional organisation! – Wonderful stuff.
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Spot on, Iain! Exactly what I had in mind when I wrote it. I imagine a lot of kidnappings are performed by the ramshackle and inexperienced. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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That can’t end well!
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Oh, no. Definitely not
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Murder on the Amazon.
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I’m afraid so.
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Beautiful words entwined in an ominous story. Kudos, dear.
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Thank you Alicia. Your kudos means a great deal 🙂
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Something really ominous is about to happen. A kidnapping or worse a murder. Good writing, Lynn.
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Thank you Neel – yes, it’s not going to end well 🙂
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ouuu, what evil lurks in the hearts of man… I hear the opening to the old radio program “The Shadow”. Indeed, what evil is lurking here. Well told. filled with suspense.
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Thank you so much. Yes, there isn’t much worse in the world than that we do to each other. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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Great tension, and great glimpse into these characters. Definitely an ominous feel, although I seem to have interpreted it differently. The phrase “fetch him” made me think that they already had the “him”, not that they were going to now go kidnap him. My first thought was that they were going to execute him, but then I cheered myself up by imagining they were going to do a hostage exchange, and maybe the “him” would get home safely after all — if Enzo doesn’t make any mistakes, at least. Okay, still ominous, but I feel a little better. 🙂
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That was exactly my thinking – ‘he’ was already a hostage and they’re going to take him to the exchange. Hopefully everyone will keep their heads and all will be well. Thanks so much for reading and your thoughtful comment 🙂
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Whew, I hope it all works out for “him”!
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Fingers crossed 🙂
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