It’s after the museum closes for the day, after the last tourist has shuffled out onto Nassau’s sweating streets, that the Whisperers come.
Jalen takes his time locking doors, scooping dropped tickets from the floor. The dust slowly settles, a powdery gauze slipping over the displays.
When he’s done he stops, lets the thump of car stereos, the calls of passersby drift like silt to the bottom of his mind as They float to the surface.
They’re shy at first, hugging the shadows, but then one will step forward, whisper a name – Efe, Temitope, Abena – then another comes and another, name after name, countless names. Jalen feels the manacles cinch his own ankles, the sea water swell his lungs as he sinks below the waves, as the sun slips away and green night falls.
Some days he wonders if he’ll join them, whispering in the darkness.
Written for What pegman saw, a prompt using Google Streetview. See here to join in and to read the other tales. Inspired by the Slavery and Emancipation Museum in Nassau.
I’m still in Mothers Day recovery mode, brain still frizzed and frazzled, so my usual Monday instalment of The Devil of Moravia will be tomorrow instead.
If I have some brain cells back by then.
Splendid story with excellent pacing and sense of place. Great work.
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Thank you Josh. Had a long hard weekend at work, so this took a long time to write! Thanks for seeing the good in it 🙂
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Dear Lynn,
There’s an ethereal feeling to this that’s quite nice. I can imagine that Jalen would have that feeling of connection to the slaves who sought freedom in Nassau. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you, Rochelle. The slave trade was a true horror and one that my own city of Bristol was largely built on. A huge, ongoing crime too, sadly. Thank you so much for reading
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Such an intriguing spell you’ve cast with that evocative little piece. I sense a world in there that’s fathoms deep. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Karen and thanks for reading 🙂
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Well, here’s to another mother’s day come and gone for you lass! Hope you have time to celebrate, the three of you, when you catch up and have some time to rest. Bill
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Thank you Bill. We did a little last night – husband made the most amazing curry and son gave me lily bulbs to grow. They know me so well 🙂
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I love your husband for his curry, it’s my absolute favorite, that dish…all for the smell when frying the onions and spices, and the sound it makes. Sigh.
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He’s become a dab hand at it too – dahl with tamarind, rice with cumin seeds, mango and coconut chutney … Marvellous it was 🙂
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So, Mothers Day… I had a lovely lunch with my two older daughters and the grandkids, then Laura and I went out for dinner. What did you do, to end up so frazzled – drink twenty cans of lager and do a few rounds on Alton Towers’ Nemisis? 😀
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Haha! Would have quite enjoyed that – I love a roller coaster! No, I was working, sadly. The last five days was long as people do love to give flowers for Mothers Day. Good for trade but with serving in the shop and making orders we had a couple of 12 – 14 hour days. All done now though. Next busy time for us is Christmas, so I can relax for 9 months! Your day sounds lovely – hope they spoiled you rotten 🙂
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they did – Sarah and Claire always make a big thing of Mothers Day. I wonder when the card companies are going to come up with Offsprings Day. I’d be up for celebratiing that. Right now I feel grateful for all of my four children.
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Ah, I’m so glad, Jane. Glad you had such a lovely day – you deserve it X
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It was a lovely break, the calm before the storm – which has already blown over as if it never was.
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Glad to here your storm has passed and you enjoyed the quiet while it lasted
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It’s just typical English weather 🙂 🙂
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You’ve got to love it 🙂
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We were promised 15 days of sunshine down yer in Norf Deb’n. We got three…
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More to come, though – many, many more 🙂
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From what I’ve been told, where you are the weather has been rubbish…
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Last few days have be a delight and a few more sunny days to come too, apparently. Loving the sunshine – makes me feel so much happier 🙂
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Me too – although down here it has been interspersed with rain, but I don’t mind 🙂
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We all need a bit of rain too – at least my plants do!
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Mysterious and vaguely sinister.
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I take that as a compliment – thanks James 🙂
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Great story💎💎
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Thanks Siddhant 🙂
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A dreamy gossamer string have you drawn. Very evocative piece.
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Thanks so much Neel 🙂
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Brilliant use of language, Lynn.
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Thanks so much Chris, glad you liked it 🙂
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