They arranged to meet outside the mairie, where the brightly flowering baskets hung frothy with bumble bees.
She watched the council officials come and go, the men in their shiny suits, the women with their coiffed, brittle hair and stiff, painted smiles.
As the town hall clock chimed twelve she sat outside a cafe in the square, fingers tapping between the checked tablecloth and her cafe creme.
When she heard the sing-song siren she just smiled, standing ready for the gendarme to handcuff her.
They’d almost made it too.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers, the grandest flash prompt flying round the ether. See here to join in and to read the other, glorious tales.
Some lovely lines in this. I loved “frothy with bumble bees”
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Thanks so much Neil – I confess I liked that one too 🙂 Thanks for reading
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Ah.. it’s a beautiful day to be arrested…
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She’s come to terms and I think she had a good run, so no hard feelings 🙂
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I like the way she is resigned to her fate and accepting. A classy criminal!
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Classy indeed – and why not if she’s had a good few years of the high life? Your fate will catch up with you in the end. Thanks Ian 🙂
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Great description in this and I love the ‘frothy with bumble bees’ too!
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Ah, thanks Clare. I was pleased with that – and I do love a bumble bee!
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Dear Lynn,
Sounds like a lovely day to be arrested. Great descriptions.
Shalom,
Rochelle
PS Add me to the frothy with bumble bees list. 😉
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Haha! Thank you Rochelle. If you know your time is coming, there are worse ways to face it than with a good coffee in your hand, surrounded by flowers! Thanks for reading 🙂
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So close and they still didn’t make it.
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Maybe she knew she’d have to pay and enjoyed the ride while she could? Thanks for reading James
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Lovely, Lynn
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Thank you Josh 🙂
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I like how she’s just sitting there waiting to be arrested. Shame to leave a good cup of coffee, I guess!
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Ha! Yes, absolutely. Maybe she enjoyed it all the more knowing it would be the last good coffe she’d drink in a very long time. Thanks for reading 🙂
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She’s a cool customer for sure. Enjoying her freedom right up to the moment it’s taken from her. Good one.
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Thanks Sandra – nice photo too! 🙂
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Am I the only one who wants to know what she’d done? She’s certainly a cool customer 🙂
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I suspect she’s a white collar criminal Jane – nothing too nasty or dirty. Maybe a bank robber …
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Wonder why she gave herself up…
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Maybe the net had been closing and she knew she couldn’t run anymore? And maybe she’s hidden millions somewhere for when she’s eventually released …
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Good logic there 🙂
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brightly flowering baskets hung frothy with bumble bees….where from do you get such wonderful lines. Superb Lynn.
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Ah, thank you so much, Neel – you’re very, very kind. And no idea where it all comes from, just neurons firing away in my brain I suppose 🙂 Thanks for reading
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I also wanted to know what she had done, maybe she is a master diamond smuggler. Now there’s a story to be told.
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I think she was something like that – a jewel thief, a white collar criminal draining millions from the bank accounts for big business. Let’s hope she had a great time while it lasted! Thanks so much for reading Michael.
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Love the “frothy with bumble bees” very nice. Lots of great description….but I want to know what she did….
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Thanks so much Sascha. Maybe I should ask everyone to supply their own ideas about what she did and we’ll see what the majority think. I was thinking she was a white collar criminal, but she could be a serial killer! 🙂
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Very atmospheric. I loved her acceptance. I don’t know what she did but she seems to be a very classy criminal.
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She does, doesn’t she? Maybe she’s had her fun and now resigned herself to paying for it. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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Lovely descriptive piece. Waiting to be arrested sounds too easy to be true, maybe she is plotting an escape involving killer bumble bees?
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Haha! Maybe. Though bumble bees are too wonderful to hurt people, surely? 🙂 Now wasps ….
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Love the bumble bees! I fear he must have betrayed her to the gendarmes.
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Thank you so much! I think you may be right there – that was my thought. He might have been caught and done a deal? Either way, she’ll face her fate with style 🙂
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Almost but not quite. Intriguing!
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Thanks so much! Really lovely of you to read my tale 🙂
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Loved the bumble bee phrase! She seems to be cool and calm about her arrest. I wonder if she views this as a simple game!
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Another move in the great game? Perhaps, though for now she’s caught in check mate I think! Loved your story too – such a great reflection of a changing relationship in such a short word count. Beautifully done
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My pleasure! Thanks a lot, Lynn!
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Strange juxtaposition of the peaceful setting and the coming chaos. I like it very much.
Tracey
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Thanks so much Tracey. Some people can be calm under pressure, can’t they? Myself, I’d go to pieces! Thanks so much for reading
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I love how she is calm and collected while waiting for her arrest. A strong character for sure. Loved this!
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Thanks so much. Yep, a strongwilled character alright. Let’s hope we can all face our fates with such stoicism. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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This is a story that sticks with you.
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Glad you thought so Dawn. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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I should think that whatever her crime was, she was simply tired of running… otherwise, why just sit there and wait.
Add me to that huge list of frothy with bumblebees fan club! 😉
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Ah, thank you! I think you’re right – tired of running and just tired. Glad you liked the bees – always love a frothy pod of bees! 🙂
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