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Each time the snow fell, covering the land in gnawing cold and ankle deep crunch, she went out looking. And when ice turned the world to a hard snap … she searched then too.
Looked for the lamp post with its prism of glass, for dancing, gaseous shadows falling on hard packed earth. Looked for the faun and his presents clothed in paper and trussed with string.
Sitting under the fir trees, waiting for chattering beavers, for sleigh rides and Turkish Delight – Always Winter, never Christmas – she was filled with so much yearning, such a need for magic, it was as if the frost had bitten her heart, as if it was in shards in her chest, cracked like a broken ice puddle. Beneath her feet there was never magic, only the parent of grey, gritty slush.
She’s old now, still searching. Still driven by that frostbitten heart. But sometimes, I swear her breath smells of rosewater and lemons and I wonder …
Written for Priceless Joy’s Flash Fiction for Aspiring Writers. See here to join the fun.
And if – dear, bereft reader – you are ignorant of the land I am describing, then you merely need to step this way. Mind those moth balls, now.
Ah, I recognized it right away. I can relate to being young and wanting so badly for that magic to be true, but how tragic that she let it take over her life like that. Unless, given that last line, there’s something to it… Oh my!
I’m not seeing your post on the FFfAW page — maybe it’s just delayed, but you might want to check.
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Thanks, Joy – went on to the link up and sorted it out. When I schedule a post that uses that little blue , I often forget to go back and put my link in place. Glad you recognised this – I remember this kind of feeling, a yearning for the worlds I read about the feeling was a physical pain. I so wanted to disappear into some of those books when I was a kid. I’ve grown out of that of course. Probably 🙂
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I still feel that way about some books. 😉
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Me too 🙂
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Is she still wearing lipstick, I wonder, or even nylons? Revisits are tricky things anyway, things are never the way they were, never the way you remember them.
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How very true that is! Never go back, I say. Thank you so much for reading Chris 🙂
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Beautifully descriptive Lynne, you had me there with the character..
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Thank you so much Michael 🙂
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Very descriptive, brought alive youth and its yearning. Lovely writing, as always, Lynn.
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Thank you so much, Neel 🙂
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Reblogged this on Hypervigilant.org and commented:
A little gem from one of my favorite writers (about a story by one of my other favorite writers). Enjoy the breathtaking moment away from reality.
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Ah, thank you so much for the reblog, Casey. That’s very lovely of you. And thank you for your kind comment too 🙂
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I keep going back to read it, first from Lucy’s POV, and then from the POV of the white witch…what if she’d been left in our world in The Magician’s Nephew…hmmm….
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They are such great stories of good versus evil and very empowering for children when they feel they are not in control of their own lives. And just good fantasy too of course
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I recently listened to a C.S. Lewis biography; he was such an interesting guy! I agree with you–fabulous stories.
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Yes, you’re right. I know very little about his personal life to be honest – only what I learned from the film Shadowlands years ago. He was older when he married I think and his wife passed away quite young. I also think he was good friends with JRR Tolkien, so that must have been fascinating company to mix in 🙂
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LOVE
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This is awesome!!
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Thank you so much. And thanks for reading 🙂
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And they say the Narnia books are for children and young adults… not at all. Timeless classics, beautifully remembered here.
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Thank you Iain. You have to love CS Lewis’ imagery – fauns under lampposts, always winter never Christmas – boung to appeal to young and old 🙂
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Wow. I really like this story and the way you told it!
The Snow
Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~
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Thank you so much and thanks for reading 🙂
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Lovely
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Thank you Michael 🙂
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