photo by Annie Theby via Unsplash
For some context … The VW reminded me of Trixie, a red campervan that plays an important role in my urban fantasy work in progress. Below is an extract in which our heroes are being chased through the streets of York by a huge and terrifying creature – all bat wings, claws and fangs. If they can only reach the VW and safety …
The shadow of King’s Court was coming closer and closer and below the pound and slap of their footsteps he heard something — the thrum of a VW engine.
‘We’re going to do it,’ shouted Neil. ‘We’re nearly safe.’
Suddenly there was another loud screech and it was all the movie sound effects he’d ever heard, every terrifying alien bug mother, every nameless horror – angry, frustrated, on the attack. There was a loud crash. The ground rocked beneath his feet, throwing him down. On his knees on the cobbles, Neil dared to look behind him.
The creature that had been caught up in the shop sign was free, the bracket piercing the membrane hanging from its wing, plaster clinging to the metal.
Dipping its head, it plodded towards him.
Written for Sonya at Only 100 Words’ Three Line Tales. See here to join in and to read the other stories.
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Ooh, terrifying! Great tension there, Lynn, with just enough description to make the scene feel real.
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Thanks Joy. Going to work on a big edit soon and I’m sure I’ll find a lot of mistakes throughout, but it will be nice to revisit the characters. Thanks for reading
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Skeery!
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Thanks for reading Patricia
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OH, NICE! wanna read more, please
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Thanks Samantha. Hopefully one day there will be more – in book form 🙂
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You write great mystery pieces. Great tale. 🙂
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Ah, thank you so much. That’s really lovely of you. Thanks so much for reading
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You’re very welcome. Looking forward to reading more from you. 🙂
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Thanks Marie 🙂
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