photo by Ben White via Unsplash
Watching my small son sing was the best – he’d inhale so deeply, the force of his own breath would make him stand on tiptoe, gradually sinking to the ground as he sang, like a deflating balloon.
The sound wasn’t good – he’d sing whatever came into his head, regardless of the tune – but his grinning enthusiasm, that was what I loved.
I watch his chest rise and fall now, the mechanical rhythm of the ventilator in place of his own puppyish gasping. I long to take him in my arms but he’s attached to the bed with lines and drips, all the things that keep him alive.
I wish I could hear that tuneless song just once more before he goes.
Written for Sonya’s Three Line Tales. See the pic and hone a tale. See here to join in and to read the other stories.
*The title comes from the Prince of Denmark’s last words in Shakespeare’s Hamlet.
I wonder at your skill to elevate your story. This is utterly beautiful. Thank you.
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Thank you so much for your kindness FP. And thanks for reading
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What a heartbreaking story, Lynn, whew! I suspected something was going to be tragic when I saw the title, and you definitely followed through. .
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Yes – too much of a give away that title? Thank you Joy. Ridiculous, but I made myself sad writing it
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Not too much of a give-away, I wouldn’t say: only some nice foreshadowing I hear you; I make myself sad with what I write sometimes too.
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And that’s a good thing I guess – though we better make sure we don’t write downbeat subjects all the time!
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A tragic story, but beautifully told.
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A very sad and tragic story so very wonderfully written, Lynn.
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Thank you so much Neel
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The true brilliance here, is that you gave the child a terrible singing voice. It would have been so easy – and so obvious – to have made him a musical prodigy. We’d all have thought it was a great story, but this is so much better. You gave it an edge by making it all about a mother’s love.
It took my breath away, and at the same time reminded me of how lucky I am.
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