Shona drifts past another blank-eyed goddess.
She checks her watch. An hour until the coach collects them from the museum. Only mid-morning and her stomach’s rumbling.
Another gallery. The walls Pompeian red. In the centre of the room, a horse statue, on its back a child. The room is deserted, the air thick, steamy. Her pulse beats loud in her ears, breath coming fast –
Muscle moving beneath her, a jolt as the ground leaps up, falls away, rises again. Her arms scream, fingers white on the reins. She steals a look behind – no one. Tempted to slow, to ease the pain and the gasping, retching, but they’ll come, they’ll come, they’ll never stop and there’s only the horse between her and them and as long as she rides she’s safe. As long –
‘Miss?’
A concerned face swims into view, but she’s already running. She’ll always be running.
Written for What Pegman Saw, a writing prompt using Google Streetview. See here to read the other stories and share one of your own.
Strangely, considering a location chock-a-block with history, I found inspiration hard to come by today. Until I ventured into the the Archaelogical Museum and discovered this amazing statue. The Jockey of Artemision is so dynamic, so different from those stiff, cool-eyed goddesses – so modern in a way – I was captivated.
Fantastic story. I really like the tension in her vision, the sense of peril. And then the jolt of awakening, the karmic realization. Terrific work.
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Thank you so much, Josh. This one took me a while, but I was content enough with it in the end. Thanks for the kind comment 🙂
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Love how the character is transported in this vivid piece. Art has the power to transport us. Plenty of rich possibility in imagining where it’s taken her!
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Thanks Karen. Wasn’t sure if this was some kind of supernatural episode or a memory long buried – the reader can decide I guess. Thanks for reading 🙂
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What a vivid description of riding desperately to escape. I wonder what it was? You made it so believable and realistic.
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Thank you Penny. Yes, I wasn’t sure myself if this was a supernatural moment or a memory. I veer towards the latter now. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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Great image find. I took it to be something in her past coming back to her memory and settings off her reaction. Expertly done.
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Thank you Iain – yes, I veered that way in the end. A terrible past she physiaclly escaped but that will never really leave her in peace. Thank you for the kind comment
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Interesting interpretation of the prompt. Well done.
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Thank you James 🙂
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I’m thinking that statue has brought back some terrifying memories for her. Nice one!
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Thank you. Yes, I think you’re right. Some things are best left buried.
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