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If I could cast a magic spell I would not wish for doubloons nor gems large as apples, heavy as the ice that seals our well these bitter mornings past.
Ermine and mink, rivers of silk and satin hold no glamour in my heart. I seek no fortune or renown or any home outside our shuttered cottage, its mossy thatch, the scent of tallow and our lowing beasts.
The only spell I crave is to be made as stone, a sculpted woman with no flesh heart beating in its bony cage.
Perhaps then I should miss you less.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers. See the pic and write a tale. See here to share and read the other stories.
I struggled a bit with this one. Then I saw the back of that impressive sculpture in the foreground and thought of being turned to stone.
Apologies in advance. Due to work commitments I’m very late to the party and doubt I’ll Be able to read many other posts before FF comes round again. Sorry if I miss reading your story and many thanks if you take the time to read mine.
Splendid!
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Thanks Tish
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This is beautifully poetic, I could just imagine teaching it to my year 11’s. 🙂 I was late to the party too this week.
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Ah, thank you Jennifer – what a terrific compliment that is. Yes, late to the party is always a bit weird, running to catch up
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A work of art fit for any great museum, Lynn.
I utterly adore this piece.
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Thank you so much C! So glad you liked it – very kind
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Oh my goodness, Lynn. I read your piece with increasing delight. It is literally word-perfect: the pathetic, agonizing wish to be a woman of stone, the heart in the bony cage, the tender detail of the tallow and the lowing beasts. Fabulous. Massively emotional writing. And I love the title too.
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Ah, thank you Jilly. So very kind of you. It’s a sad wish, isn’t it, to be made into something unfeeling? But occasionally that feels easier than going through all that pain. Thank you so much for your kind words
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That is … beautiful.
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Ah, thank you Crispina
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Beautifully rendered, Lynn
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Thank you Neil
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Dear Lynn,
I’ll be brief. Simply gorgeous.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thank you Rochelle. You made me smile with pleasure
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So tragic!!
And beautifully put!! ☺️
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Thank you so much
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Most welcome! ☺️
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🙂
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Oh, my! This is stunning!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Well, you may have come a little late to the party this week, but that was worth waiting for! Beautifully done, Lynn and a cracking final line.
Susan A Eames at
Travel, Fiction and Photos
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Thanks so much Susan 🙂
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So poetic and poignant!
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Just lovely, yes lovely.
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Thanks so much Mike
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So beautiful. The heart clenches in sympathy and perhaps. . . anticipation?
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Thank you for the kind comment . So glad it worked for you 🙂
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Oh, what a heartbreaking direction this one took in the end! Gorgeous imagery.
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Thanks so much Joy! So many broken love stories out there in the real world, don’t you think? Probably many more than fairy tale endings! Thanks so much for reading
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Maybe that’s why we love the fairy tale endings so much.
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Well, the struggle does not show Lynn, wonderful piece this week, well done 🙂
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Thank you Iain
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Lovely bit of writing, Lynn. My compliments 🙂
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Thank you very much Jane 🙂
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🙂
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I think this time you outdid yourself. This is gorgeous writing.
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Thank you so much Gabi. Means a lots that you think that 🙂
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To create beauty out of tragedy is a considerable gift, Lynn, and you accomplish exactly that in this story. It’s lovely.
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Thank you Penny. It felt right and I’m so very glad it read well too
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Wah! Sheer poetry with layers.
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Thanks so much 🙂
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Bloody hell! This is GOOD – more than good – it’s marvellous. It’s the way you punch; it takes the breath away. x
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Thank you dear Jane. This one flowed while some trickle 🙂 I just felt her grief, that desire to be free from pain for a while. We’ve all been there, eh? Thank you x
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Yes – we’ve all been there – or in the vicinity. It’s no fun x
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XXX
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