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We’d hear the phut-phut of the old Triumph motor bike minutes before seeing it. As it drew nearer, other sounds – the twin rattles of the sidecar’s loose wheel and the cage strapped to the pillion with cable ties.
The din snaked along cobbled lanes, in through open windows, drowned out the excited yabber of playing kids, of old time tunes on the radio.
Then Magda would appear in scratched goggles and a flying helmet, squint-eyed cat pressed to the floor of the cage, claws locked round the wires.
Magda chose to be alone, mum said, but I never learned why.
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Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers. See the pic and write a tale and don’t forget to read and comment on others, found here.
Ah, memories. Like them. Though in my memories the Triumphs and the Nortons roared. Guess it was a smaller bike, or maybe it was just very old. 🙂
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I was imagining it ancient, hardly able to move anymore, a bit like its owner! Thanks for reading, Crispina
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Always like your fiction. 🙂
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Beautiful characterization! I love when that happens..
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Thank you Violet 🙂
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I really like how the motorbike heralds her coming. And that cat flattening in the cage is classic.
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Thank you Andrea! She was very clear in my head 🙂
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‘Yabber’. What a cracking verb! Lovely little piece.
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Thank you Matthew 🙂
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Great image! It sounds like her cat is a little scared of her driving 🙂
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Ha! I think it is. Thanks Draliman
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Oh Lynn, that’s wonderful! Terrific descriptive writing and a last line that made me absolutely cackle!
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Ah, thank you so much Penny! So glad you enjoyed it. I saw her very clearly, puttering along the back streets, disturbing her neighbours! Thanks for reading
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I really love it… to me it sounds like Magda is very independent
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I don’t think Magda has the patience to put up with the conventional. I love these descriptions, I could hear the Triumph, smell the mixture of dust and fumes. And the cat–wonderful (to read)–the poor critter sure isn’t happy.
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Dear Lynn,
You left me wanting to know more about Magda. As always, tantalizing descriptions and set up.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Great description, great character you conjured up. The cat hanging on for dear life had me laughing 🙂
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Magda sounds like a formidable woman! 🙂
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I love all these sounds!
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