photo by NASA – click here for full res version (and with this one, you want the big version to see all the detail)
Sylvie’s cheek ached, the plastic of the telescope’s eyepiece unforgivingly hard. For days since the explosion, she’d watched the fallout mark the cosmos, staining indigo golden brown. The initial blast had resembled a chrysanthemum bloom – fat, swollen – then as the dust entered the neighbouring constellation’s gravity, the bloom stretched and broke apart, its petals thrown lose.
She knew she was looking into the past, that due to the vast distance light must travel from the fringes of the universe, the impact had hit nearby planets thousands – hundreds of thousands – of years ago.
But she couldn’t help wonder. If she listened hard as she watched the collision on that far pocket of creation –
Would she hear the screams?
Written for Sonya’s Three Line Tales – an exercise in stretching the rules to snapping point, as I see it. See the beautifully chosen pic and write your damndest. See here for Ts and the inevitable Cs.
What a beautiful image and what a great wee story! I love the ending!
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Thank you, lovely. X
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What an awe-inspiring idea, to be able to peer so far across the stars, so deep into the past, to see such monumental destruction — something so unbelievably huge and powerful at its source turned into such a tiny image in a telescope.
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It’s sort of eerie, don’t you think? Seeing into the past as we look into deep space. Intriguing stuff. Thanks for reading, Joy 🙂
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Amazing, so many concepts of space and time in 3 li es! No one hears the silent scream
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Thank you, Sonali. Yes, I took a bit of a liberty here, as space is a vacuum and sound can’t pass through it. But perhaps she’d hear the scream in her head? Anyway, thanks so much for reading and commenting 🙂
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*lines, for some reason the text box is blank even when I type the comment, so I’m pretty much typing blind! Sorry for any typos
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Coming through loud and clear here! Typo free. 🙂
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Superb Twist!!
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Thank you very much 🙂
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You are very welcome 🙂
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🙂
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That aspect has always done my head in—that what we are seeing is so old it probably isn’t even there any more. Great story 🙂
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Yes, one of the many mind boggling facts about the universe. It’s all too much to take on board, really. Best to accept it all on face value and have a nice cup of tea and a Custard Cream, I’d say :). Thanks for reading, Jane
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Meanwhile, that meteor is just getting up a nice head of steam…
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Yep. Everybody duck! 🙂
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Hmmm …
That’s the thing from a distance it all looks a bit impersonal.
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Yes, hard to imagine there might be other life forms out there living and dying. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Fab little story, Lynn! Indeed, if you listen closely enough, will you hear the screams?
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Thanks Sonya. Fortunately you won’t, sound doesn’t travel through space, thank goodness. But maybe she’ll hear them in her mind 🙂
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Yeah, I know, now that you mention it… Don’t I always complain that explosions in space don’t come with a massive “boom”?
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Haha! Yes, true. Silent explosions in space is something my husband – sci-fi fan and science geek – loves to see on films. That and spaceships in daylight rather than deep space. He is a funny man 🙂
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What a thought! Loved the last part 🙂
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Thank you so much. And thanks for reading 🙂
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My pleasure 🙂
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🙂
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You’re really good at using descriptive words, I always find myself immersed and would come up feeling entertained after reading your tales. Nice one!
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Thank you so much. It’s good fun to find the juggle about with things, to search for the right word and finally feel you’ve found it. Thank you so much for reading and for your encouraging comments 🙂
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And you seem to always fnd the right words. It’s always a pleasure reading your work.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Beautiful and a bit haunting. This was a really great angle on the prompt photo.
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Thank you. Such an inspiring photo. Made me imagine galaxies far, far away 🙂 Thanks for reading
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Always been fascinated by that thought, that what we are seeing now, happened long ago. Very strange. Love the last line…the screams…!!!
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Thank you! Yes, weird thought, isn’t it? Any stars we see in deep space may have winked out of existence years ago. The closest we have to time travel – for now 🙂 Thanks for reading
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