photo by Sean Tan via Unsplash
The lake is icy still, a mirror reflecting the sky’s shifting, mottled face, just as it did that day years ago.
Quiet here but for the blow of Canada geese, the creak and whisper of distant trees, dour chaperones to my every move.
If I had heard your cries. If I had kept you close. But ‘ifs’ are as helpful as that sign and its shedding paint, the letters dropping through the frigid water …
Written for Sonya at Only 100 Word’s Three Line Tales. See the lovely pic and write a little tale. See here to join in and to read the other stories.
The way you explain the entire scene is chilling. I can almost feel the letters dipping into the frigid water! Amazing!
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Thank you so much Sonali for the lovely comment! Thanks so much for reading too 🙂
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Very poignant and I love the memory used to tell the tale.
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Thank you very much. And thanks so much for reading
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Incredible! Painted such a vivid atmosphere that I got goosebumps!
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Thank you so much! That’s a really lovely comment – thanks for taking the time to read the story 🙂
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Loved it 🙂
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Thanks again 🙂
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Grief, regrets, longing, I felt those emotions as if I am the one experiencing those things. You really are great with words Lynn, I love this tale!
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Thank you so much! What a really lovely comment. Thanks for taking the time to read the story and I’m glad it wokred for you
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Your writing never cease to amaze me Lynn, honestly. As soon as I begin the first sentence I can’t help but finish the whole thing😂😂😂 and I always find myself amazed and more than satisfied.
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Thank you again. So very kind and I’m delighted you feel that way about some of my stories. You’ve made me smile 🙂
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Written well….The deep sorrow comes through when reading this.
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Thank you so much – I’m glad the emotion came through 🙂
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Beautiful writing!
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Thank you so much Sascha 🙂
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A story as deep and dark as the waters.
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Thanks Lorraine they are dark indeed 🙂
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the deep regret was hauntingly stark against the other images you created – really agonising piece – loved every line but my favourite – the letters dropping through the frigid water
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Thank you so much! I’m really glad you liked it 🙂
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So sad, the tale behind the lines…
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marvelous!so chilly and tragic
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Thank you Samantha 🙂
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