This week Pegman takes us to Pena, Portugal.
‘Beautiful, isn’t it?’ He watched her face closely, a smile playing at his lips, never warming his eyes.
She was careful to control her expression in front of him, keep a light burning in her own eyes, even when cold lead seemed to fill her chest. A painful lesson she had learned early in their marriage – he must always see what he wanted to see. ‘It is truly beautiful,’ she said.
The Moorish arches, streams twining through tree ferns and palms, the mountainside hugged in green … Yes, beautiful.
Another beat to examine her expression and he was satisfied. He released the grip on her arm, turned to talk to one of his men, his attention pulled to something more important.
Her husband was a brilliant man, but one thing she knew and he did not. That no amount of riches can fool the prisoner they are free.
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Brilliant, Lynn, just brilliant!
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Aw, thanks so much Penny. That’s really lovely of you
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Great build up and delivery of the punch line, Lynn
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Thanks so much Chris. Lovely coment 🙂
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Really superb. This ties up really well, too. Excellent work.
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Thanks so much Josh. Really glad you think so. Took a while to get it right, but got there in the end I think 🙂
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Dear Lynn,
That last line sent chills through me. Very well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much Rochelle 🙂
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I echo what Penny said–just brilliant!
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Aw, thanks so much Karen 🙂
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A brilliantly chilling piece, Lynn. I hope she manages to escape from him.
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I have a nasty feeling she might not. Thanks so much for reading Louise
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Such a brilliant story and a terrific last line. Simply majestic, Lynn.
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Thanks so much Neel 🙂
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A really immersive piece with an emotional core, I wouldn’t have minded more of this, a totally different kind of Period drama from you. A quiet fire and an intriguing torch bearer. ~ P ~
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Ah, thank you Pola. Yes, I do love a fiesty period heroine, even if she is fiesty in her own quiet way. You had to have some courage to survive and thrive as a woman in some periods of the past – and today too. Thanks so much for the supportive comment
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Ain’t that the honest truth my dear! Amen.
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Great story and last line! Though I was kinda hoping he was going to take an “accidental” tumble off the battlements 🙂
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Thanks very much. Yes, that would be a solution, wouldn’t it? Sadly, I suspect he’ll die at home of old age. Thanks for reading
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Mmm…that last line is powerful. A great read, in so few lines. ❤
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Thanks so much! Yes, a grim situation but so many women find themselves in similar ones. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Very true hopefully she escapes soon. You’re welcome. 🙂
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