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Horns blast, hooves ring sharp and urgent on the cobbles. A blizzard of barks, shouts and calls has Tom jumping from his stool, sleep crusted lashes flicking as he reaches for his lamp, porter slopping from the jug to brighten the flagstones.
A mist rises from hot horse flanks, forming clouds dense enough to be a fog slunk up from the low marshes.
‘Ale’s sour,’ the coachman yells, emptying the tankard at his feet. Tom shrugs and runs on, leaving the dough-faced sot cussing.
Tom yearns for his bed by the stove, the familiar scratch of his straw mattress, the smell of wood smoke in his hair as he plummets into sleep.
Soon. Soon.
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Written for Sonya at Only 100 Words Three Line Tales. See the pic prompt, write you tale. See here for full Ts and Cs.
Great story. The language and descriptions really draw me in.
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Thank you so much. I do like writing a bit of historical fiction, though poor Tom could really do with a break 🙂 Thank you for reading
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Very atmospheric! I love the woodsmoke in his hair 🙂
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Thank you, Jane. I appreciate the feedback and thanks for reading.
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It’s a very descriptive piece. Not a word too much 🙂
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Thank you, Jane for your valued comments 🙂
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I love the way you leave these clever little traps, then watch as we tumble headfirst into some foetid corner of history 🙂
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Ha! Yes, it seems to me most of human history is pretty foetid, so a lot to choose from on that score! Thanks so much for reading, Jane
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Alwaysalwaysalways a pleasure 🙂
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Thank you, Jane 🙂
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