Copyright – Rochelle Wisoff-Fields
Mum raps on the pane with her finger like a Morse code tapper – dit dit dit. A habit of hers. She reaches the ‘S’ in her distress signal and forgets what comes after.
‘Lace inside and out, inside and out,’ she says.
Dit dit dit along with the words, though the rhythms of tap and speech don’t match.
‘What is it, Mum?’ I take her hand.
She nods to the window. ‘Lace inside and out.’
Ah. The embroidered curtain against the speckled snow.
‘That’s right,’ I smile, brushing a stray hair from her eyes.
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers. See the photo and write 100 words to go along with it. See here for full Ts and Cs.
Mum may be losing her marbles, but she can still coin a great metaphor
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Thanks Neil 🙂 Out of the mouths of ‘babes’, eh?
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That brought tears to my eyes!
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Thank you, Louise. Your very kind. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Ah yes. Poignant and real. Very good, Lynn! I always look forward to your entry of the week.
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Thank you, WM, you’re very kind. I love yours too – always something quirky encased in a super piece of writing 🙂
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Quirky? Me? Hey, I’ll take that! Thanks!
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Haha! My pleasure 🙂
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So poignant and real — I was my mother’s caregiver (dementia) for years.
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I’m sorry to hear your mother suffered from such a tragic disease. It’s the cruellest of diseases. Thanks so much for reding 🙂
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Yes, it is. Her sister died of Alzheimer’s. So my cousins and I wait and watch ourselves.
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Hopefully, that will pass you by. An erosion of personality is the saddest thing, isn’t it? The fact the person you loved is gone (except in snatches) long before they actually leave you. Thanks so much for sharing your story.
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Such an interesting read!
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Thank you. And thanks for reading 🙂
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Oh this made me sad… I think though she has a lot of sweetness left.
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I think you’re right, Bjorn – as so many people with dementia do. But it’s crippling, wasting disease too. Thanks so much for reading and for your kind comments
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So quietly touching. It really does look like lace inside and out, too.
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Thanks, Joy. Somehow, noticing the laciness inside and out led me to the sweet, dazed old lady. Funny where our brains take us. Thanks so muc for reading 🙂
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That was so beautiful. I love how you were able to create so much meaning in such few words!
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Thank you so much for your lovely comment! And thank you for reading. Lovely to have you here 🙂
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Watched a fascinating programme on Dementia earlier in the year. Their approach was to humour the patient’s state of mind i.e. if they want to live in the 1950’s then let them, go with it. The worst thing you can do at times is to tell people they’re losing their mind. Support, don’t scold. See you next week.
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What a great idea – hard work for the care providers, perhaps, but wonderful for the patients. I guess it’s similar to music therapy. Patients remember songs from their youth easier than who’s the current Prime Minister and it brings them back to themselves for a while. Really interesting, thanks Paul
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A lovely mind!
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Yes, I think you’re right. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Beautiful, powerful and gentle all at once. Very nicely told
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Thank you, Siobhan. Thanks for reading and for your kind comments 🙂
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A very poignant piece. Nicely done.
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Thank you, Sandra 🙂
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Beautiful.
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Thanks very much Shana. and thanks for reading 🙂
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Very moving – it brought a lump to my throat.
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Ah, thank you, Clare. You’re very kind 🙂
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Not at all – it was beautiful 🙂
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Thanks Clare 🙂
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Such a lovely vignette, I think something got in my eye…
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Thank you, very kind. And thanks for reading 🙂
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This lovely in its sadness. Lace inside and out describes more than the window and the curtain. It is a tragedy how personalities change. There’s love in the sadness. Great writing, Lynn.
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Thanks Gabi. Yes, don’t know why the phrase struck me – just fortunate, I guess – but when it did I felt I had my angle. That old lady’s voice was in my head. Kind of creepy when that happens 🙂
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It’s so difficult to watch a parent disappear. I loved the gentleness of this piece.
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Thanks so much Tracey. Yes, horrible. One of the saddest things that can happen to a person. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Sad and beautiful at the same time. Very touching
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Thank you, Mick. Very kind. And thanks for reading 🙂
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Dear Lynn,
Very moving and all too real. Well done.
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks Rochelle. Such a lovely image this week – very inspirational. All the best 🙂
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Sad and touching.
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Thank you. And thanks for reading 🙂
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Your writing never disappoints, but this cameo has a particular glow. Beautiful and touching…
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Thank you Jane. This one has touched a few people. Dementia is so tragic – that gradual hollowing out of the person you loved. Horrible disease. Thanks for reading 🙂
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Always a pleasure 🙂
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Thanks you 🙂
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I love the way you had her tapping out SOS – a lovely touch. Beautiful portrait of the old lady and also of the daughter. Our minds followed similar paths with this prompt.
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Thanks Margaret. Left a comment on your story, which was excellent. Yes, funny how we were drawn to the same idea through one lacy curtain. Thanks so much for reading and commenting 🙂
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That was beautiful!
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Thank you, Dawn. Very kind 🙂
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Mother’s slipping but her mind is still working enough to know beauty when she sees it. Well done, Lynn. 🙂 — Suzanne
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Thank you, Suzanne. Yes, you’re right. A little of her remains. Thanks very much for reading 🙂
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Just lovely.
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Thank you so much, Effie. It was a while back, but I did like this one. Thanks for reminding me of it 🙂
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