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Each member of the family added something to the chair – Den chose Grandad’s overcoat, Sooky his battered tobacco tin, Hannah the ‘lucky’ football scarf with its clumped and tatty fringing. The last few pieces were tied on with lengths of Grandad’s jute twine that he saved ‘in case’.
‘The ice in’t thick enough to hold it,’ warned Frankie.
But the chair stood proud as the match was struck. Soon flames blackened the scarf, the overcoat, blistered the tin, until finally the ice gave way, swallowing it all with a hiss and gulp.
In the chill dark, they whispered, ‘Love you, Grandad.’
Written for Rochelle Wisoff-Field’s Friday Fictioneers. See the photo and join other wonderfully talented writers to create a tale. See here to join in.
oh what a beautiful way to say goodbye to granddad…. well done – sad – but moving and nice.
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Thank you so much! That’s really kind of you and I’m so glad it worked for you
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☀😊
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🙂
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Lovely, Lynn
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Thank you so much Neil 🙂
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A funeral pyre of his favourite things… I love it!
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Ah, thanks so much Dale 🙂
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Absolutely lovely story, Lynn. Well done.
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Ah, thank you so much Sandra. Positive comments always appreciated from you 🙂
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Great send off for Grandpa, did he have some connection to the vikings? Not quite the same as being set adrift on a boat, but I picture Grandpa spending a lot of time in his favourite chair! Nice one Lynn.
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No, no connection with the vikings, just a symbolic gesture to give Grandad a suitable send off. Thanks so much, Iain 🙂
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Lovely idea, and a great image too, of how a burning chair piled with mementos would look both noble and somewhat silly at the same time, until it crashed through the ice — what a dramatic send-off for dear old Grandpa!
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Ah, thanks so much, Joy! I liked that image too. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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Touching story, and I think that was a lovely way to say one’s goodbyes.
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Thanks so much Jade, you’re very kind. Thanks for reading 🙂
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A lovely Viking send off.
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Thanks Michael, you’re very kind 🙂
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What a fitting memorial. Reminds me much of a similar tradition in some of the Native American tribes. Fitting, indeed.
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Thank you so much! I didn’t know that about Native American tribes – I’ll look into that. Thanks for reading 🙂
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When we don’t have a body (as sometimes happens with war) we make a bundle. In each bundle is placed special things that remind us of the person. Each person speaks of what the item means to them and to the deceased. Then, the item is placed in the bundle. after everyone does so, the bundle is sewn shut by the dearest relative (or Eldest there, in case of no living relatives). The bundle is either buried or burned according to that tribes custom. My second husband was buried such.
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What a very touching tradition. Such a wonderful way for loved ones to gather and talk about the person they’ve lost, to make a tribute to them. Thank you for sharing that with me
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Aww. An act of love.
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Thank you so much 🙂
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Quite a memorial. I love it.
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Thank you so much and thanks for reading 🙂
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A proper Viking send off.
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Thanks so much, James 🙂
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Awww. That was a very touching last line. Good job, Lynn.
He must have been a Viking! 😉
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Thanks so much Kent 🙂
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A Viking funeral in its best form. I love what you did with the prompt!
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Ah, thank you so much, Alicia. That’s lovely of you. Very much appreciated 🙂
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The Vikings knew how to give you a good send-off. Funny how so many of us have associated the chair with saying goodbye to a grandparent. I love your goodbye.
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Yes, I thought that. There’s something about that chair that says an older person, I suppose. Thank you so much, Jane – means a lot 🙂
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Dear Lynn,
I love where the prompt took you. Imaginative and believable. Brava! Applause!
Shalom,
Rochelle
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Thanks so much, Rochelle. So nice to be able to send off a loved one with a fitting tribute. Thank you so much 🙂
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Good choice with the jute twine, love the sound of that, the proud match too! So long grand-dad!
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Thank you Bill! I loved the twine too – I remember my nan saving string, little bundles all wound round themselves in the kitchen drawer. Thanks so much 🙂
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Lovely descriptions as always and the sentiment is pitch perfect.
Tracey
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Thank you Tracey. Nice to send off a loved one in a fitting way. And thanks so much for reading 🙂
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Very touching story. I really enjoyed the addition of the twine that Granddad saved just incase.
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Ah, thank you so much! I remember my own grandma doing the same. She saved used wrapping paper too – I remember receiving presents with last years tape marks on the paper! Thank you
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Nice memories. My mother saves tinfoil, my mother-in-law washed and reused plastic bags.
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Practical and waste saving too. I have been known to reuse tin foil – and to wash plastic bags 🙂
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Cleverly conceived and created, Lynn, good story.
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Thank you so much, C. 🙂
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Nicely written Lynn. I loved how you did his ‘Viking’ funeral pyre for Grandma and to pay her tribute/remember her by. Cleverly done 🙂
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Thank you so much, Amanda! Really glad you liked it 🙂
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A great way to say goodbye, a funeral pyre of his favourite things, like a Hindu ceremony almost. And the writing as always, is perfect
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Ah, thank you, Michael for such a lovely comment. Truly appreciate that 🙂
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Such a bittersweet story Lynn. Lovely idea.
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Thank you Louise. Good to be able to mark someone’s death in a meaningful way. Thanks so much for reading 🙂
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It’s a lovely thought. Got me thinking.
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🙂
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A Viking Funeral, who would have not liked that? Fine story, Lynn.
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Thank you, Ted. Thanks for reading and commenting too 🙂
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That’s cool. I should get such a sendoff!
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