Photo by Alyssa Smith
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‘You know perched here, looking over the city, I feel like I could clamber up the side of the New Yorker, hop up onto the Empire State and grab that rainbow – wouldn’t that just be amazing?’ she said.
A glob of mustard hung from his lower lip, nuggets of burger glistening in his teeth as he said, ‘Like King Kong you mean?’
She eyed his bare forearms, the thick mats of black hair. ‘Yeah – just like King Kong,’ she said.
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For Sonya’s Three Line Tales, a photo-prompt fiction challenge to complete in just three lines. Take a look at Only 100 Words for the full rules and have a go yourself.
Nice, lol.
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Thanks Dawn 🙂
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Fantastic – I can hear hear voice as she says the final line, dripping with sarcasm. Thanks for the laugh, Lynn 🙂
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Great fun, this prompt. I think it’s helping my little grey cell’s creativity, too, to have to come up with a short story quickly. Really enjoying it, thank you. Glad I made you laugh 🙂
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Glad you liked the photo. I have to put the brakes on myself, I’d just use NYC shots if it were up to me… But I thought this was a good one, what with the rainbow. And hooray for the brain workout 🙂
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Yep, proves there’s still something in this old noggin – just needs a stir every once in a while. 🙂
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Haha! Brilliant! In one line you managed to make him kind of revolting! Well done!
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Thank you, you’re a love. We’ve all met blokes like this, haven’t we? I was trying to emphasise how mismatched they are, her dreaming of catching rainbows and he a bit of a slob. Made the poor man rather more disgusting than I intended. 🙂
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The Neanderthals? Yep! I’ve met a few
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At least you can usually hear them coming – it’s the sound of their knuckles dragging across the floor that gives them away 🙂
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😂😂😂
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great post 👍
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Thank you 🙂
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Haunting little tale. Though I’m certain that King Kong was more of a gentleman than ol’ burger-breath mustard-moustache…
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Oh, definitely! He lavished attention on Fay Wray, despite the fact she quite a screamer 🙂
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Great story
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Thanks, Donna 🙂
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That’s rather cool!! Taste the rainbow, King Kong!
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Thank you! 🙂
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Hilarious!
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Cheers, Walt. Very kind 🙂
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“Hope she finds someone with more of a poetic soul that burger-boy!” she stated. “Great story; characters developed in 3 lines!,” she added.
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Yeah, I have a feeling the relationship isn’t going to go on for much longer. She wants rainbows and he wants burgers between his teeth – they’re incompatible. Thanks for reading 🙂
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I totally wouldn’t have thought of that — how clever! Thank you so much for sharing 🙂
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Thank you for reading! Just a weird idea that popped into my head. Funny – and marvellous- how all of our brains work so differently 🙂
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Agreed! It’s so fun to read through everyone’s submissions for the images! Love it!
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So many approaches to the same prompt – amazing 🙂
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haha, King Kong dude! Love the ending! 🙂
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Thank you! And thanks for reading 🙂
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I was entertained by your brief tale, I’d look forward for your TLT next week, that’s for sure!
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Thank you – you’re very kind 🙂
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Me Kong like burger. Girl talk. No understand. Grumble grumble. Love me a good Neanderthal.
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Haha! Does it come across a bit sexist? I’m not suggesting for one moment that all men are gorillas – just some 🙂 Thank you for reading
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Oh, goodness, you made me laugh! Well executed. Poor guy, maybe there is more to him than meets the eye??!!
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…and I kinda want to double-like this!
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Thank you so much, Jenkjac – lovely of you 🙂
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I’m sure there probably! He could be a slob and adorable too. She must be with him for a reason, after all 🙂
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This is immaculate – AND it made me laugh.
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Haha! Thank you. I hope I wasn’t too unfair on the guy – I’m sure he’s very nice really, just a bit of a messy eater 🙂
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What a generous soul you are 🙂
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I just felt a bit guilty after I’d written the story – no one’s two dimensional and even the most irritating person usually has some redeeming features. Usually 🙂
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You’re right, as usual. We’re supposed to be learning to love everybody on the planet, and yet I put that guy down as a potential wife beater as soon as I read the story – talk about judgemental!
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Some people are very hard to love, though – I’ve come across three or four just coming home on the bus today! There’s me being judgemental now 🙂
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